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Here's a gay studying in my school....the moment he came to the school,the whole school started screaming and never stopped...People looked at him in strange eyes...and got his news anyway...dramas of him are everywhere...do you wanna know who he is...do you wanna know who he is...He is Mr.Extra ,the coquettish material guy .That's just him...they always got news of his personal affairs on the net...so he's to sneak away to Singapora..But people around still joked about him...do you wanna konw who he is...do you?..He fell in love with a boy,yeah,the same sex guy..what's wrong?...but everytime he makes his lover angry out of his crazy behaviors...people hate him even more.saying that he's a bitch,,an erotic prostitute,,a whore...pherhaps from the beginning they thought this love must be a joke..do you wanna know who he is..don't you think he is innocent...actually,he's me...sweetie's shameless...you told me you love me...oh bullshit..are you kidding me...no matter how do you think of me....I will never mind...but I often cry in the cornor secretly...in fact..I am a cinderella...alright...don't hurt him anymore..please...thanks..